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The disease... It's a lot like it was back then. I should do the same thing.

Anyone from Latimir that's been down at the site has to see a doctor before they come back to their apartment! We don't want anything to spread.

If the doctors need someone with healing magic, I'm only a message away!

I'll protect you, Roxas.

Hey Roxas! ... And Discedo too, I guess... You don't think my head is big, right? Axel's head is bigger than mine too, right.

I never have anything important to say anymore...

Kairi's back! It must have been really hard to go from the Islands to snow.

Oh, I need to make an announcement about that guy.

Hey Discedo, if you see an eyepatched guy in a black coat anywhere, don't go near him! He's dangerous! If he causes anyone trouble let me know, I'll deal with him personally.

Oh yeah, Axel, I got your coat. I'll drop it off.

... PRESENTS! Quick, what does everyone want?! I'll do my best to get you whatever it is!

On a not-Christmas (it's not Discomas! that's like calling Thanksgiving "Scientistpraising"!) note, since it snowed I'm trying to find ways to keep the building warmer. It's still chilly in here and it gets worse when Axel's not around.

Hm... Maybe I should send Axel around to ever room to heat it up! What do you think?

I'm gonna keep my eyes out for a sled.

I almost stepped on Roxas!

I- I'm really sorry, Roxas! I'll watch where I'm going from now on, I promise!

... I guess Discedo is the new Wonderland.

Gone Naminé hunting; be back soon!

Oh wait! Latimir got some new arrivals recently. Remember to take care of each other! Santa Claus is watching. AND it's the right thing to do!

Anyway, I gotta look around for someone. Roxas is in charge while I'm gone! If you have a problem, leave a message or tell Roxas and he'll get back to me.

Hey Latimir, what do you think about trying to decorate everything for Christmas? It's never too early to start thinking about Christmas!

And I thought I'd mention that I've got extra blankets if anyone needs them. And I've got some food stuffed somewhere for emergencies too, if anyone needs to eat.

Maybe I'll ask Santa for a fish... and new clothes.

More people?

Hey everyone, if you need a place to stay, Latimir Street Apartments always has extra room! We'd be glad to have you!

I wonder when I'll disappear... I mean, not that I will disappear or anything! But if I do, I wonder when it'll happen... I won't go down without a fight!

Is there anything around Latimir that needs to be looked at? Anything I can fix? Anyone need anything?

Christmas...

tryin to kill monsters round latimir, its not going well. magic is slow. can I get--

cant talk, gotta fight!

Everyone still has hearts, right? You're not all Heartless or Nobodies or whatever else doesn't have a heart? We gotta check right now to make sure!

And what happened yesterday morning needs to be checked too. Are we stuck in a... Let's try to figure this out together!

There was a lot of good food at the high school. I missed eating until I'm full...

So I've taken care of some of the windows in the rooms that need to be patched up and I'm about to take care of the fifth floor draft Nill told me about. Is there anything else Latimir needs?

And new people are showing up and Latimir has to have room left, so!
New people, check out Latimir Street Apartments for a place to call home!

I wonder what's up with Roxas?

I think now is a really good time for this!

Okay Latimir Street, let's get this show on the road!

As the top guy of Latimir, I'm here to listen to your complaints and your ideas. Got something you want to talk about? Let me know! Have a few questions? Ask me and I'll get back to you immediately! Need more food or water? I have enough to share! And if you're interested in moving in, that's really cool. Do it!

Lately I've been thinking: what we need is electricity! Does Discedo have any technicians that might want to help Latimir out? I can provide some of the electricity from magic, and if I have to I'll run on a giant hamster wheel!

And people from other apartments and places can offer advice too. I'll write this all down on a piece of paper... or even a big poster to hang up in the hall. And I'll look around for one of those cork wall things to hang up if people want to leave me messages.

So uh, advice away!

Axel got sick for nothing! That makes me mad.

Even if you got that chip thing taken out, you don't have your powers. That must mean... something from the chip was left behind and it's still in our bodies! The scientists could control us... maybe even control our minds!

I wish I could zap myself and go into these computers. Then I could trace things back, find these scientists and get all the answers!

Pants are too hard to move around in. I'll stick with my shorts.

And that's the last time I let a giant squid thing distract me! Roxas, Donald, I'm coming to get you and everyone else!

Knee-high socks... Legwarmers... Maybe I'll get pants.

I don't like pants, but if it'll get as cold as it did... I might borrow Roxas'.

Donald, you need pants too!

What's wrong with everyone? I'm really lost. I guess it's okay as long as the apartments aren't destroyed and people don't die.

-- Donald, are you okay?! Do you have it too? I think there's something wrong with Roxas.

Azula's not much of a girl, is she?

All right Latimir, I need volunteers for guards/watchmen/whatever you want to call protecting the apartments. Let's work together!

It's one thing after another; this is really annoying!

Can Discedo have a day when someone isn't trying to cause trouble?

Why do people think making trouble here is a good idea anyway? There are bunches of things you should be more worried about!

Like girls would be worried about taking baths, being clean and finding make-up. And doing their hair! Those are some things girls think about.

Anyway, don't make trouble or all the girls in Discedo will get you with a makeover! you'll have to answer to me!

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